Comments? Improvements?

So I hope by now that you have purchased this book and, if so, you have my heartfelt thanks. Having done so, I hope you will enjoy it to your heart's (or pussy's) content. That done, I wonder if I might humbly beg you for comments, and suggestions for improvement?

That would go a long way towards enhancing the body of work I have thus far produced, so that I can advance further along in my career, get better as a writer, and, as a benefit to you, give you more of what you want (and less of what you don't).

I feel that a healthy dialogue between writer and reader is a good and healthy thing, so I encourage you to fire away and tell me what you think of the story. Is it the plot? Do you like Daphne Everson? Is Eddie Dalton gorgeous enough for you? Is Raymond Carter suitably dastardly as the villain of the piece? What was the sex scene like - too long, too short, about right?

Anyway, whatever you have, or any concerns you might like to share - I would love to hear them. Looking forward to hearing from you, I wait here with baited breath.