What Do You Think of "Seducing the Neighbor"?


 So what is your opinion on this humungous epic? It's a bit more grand in scope than my usual 10,000-12,000-word short stories, and as such, there is more exposition, greater detail, more character development than normal, plus one particular sex scene that is huge and describes a spectacular foursome. It was really fun to write that scene, and I hope you enjoy it, too.

I would really like to hear your opinion, since to roll on regardless, churning out story after story, sex scene after sex scene, with little or no feedback, feels a little like shouting into the ether. If a tree falls in the forest and nobody heard it, did it even happen? Of course it did - I'm no Cartesian. Yet, nevertheless, for the sake of keeping up my spirits, and also for advice on improvements, it would be great to hear from you.

Indeed, it is for the sake of improvement that feedback is the most useful for me to hear. I would like to get better at this, plus it would be great to really hone in on what you would like to see more of, avoid repeating what you would like to see less of, and generally enhance the writing experience for me and reading experience for you. So, by all means, reply away!

In the meantime, I'll get on with planning my next story!

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