Introducing Patrick


So in my last post, I explained how this second cheerleader erotica story features my lead character, Angela, and her university cheerleading squad of four hot freshman friends, Becky, Caroline, Daphne, and Emma, now having to decide whether to take up the offer of joining a competitive cheerleading team at the local civic center contest, after being informed of it by the college football coach, Jake Saxon. Angela is torn between developing her sporting career and being faithful to her friends, sticking together with her existing squad for their sakes.

I will give you a bit of a spoiler here, and tell you upfront that she and Jake, having become boyfriend and girlfriend after the amazingly hot sex session she had with him at the end of the first short story, are going to have a bust-up, but not before her ultimately deciding to compromise by going to the contest alone, to join someone else's squad, just to see whether it is worth doing as a sport with the other four women.

I did this to knock off Jake Saxon as the male lead. I thought it was important for a 23-year-old man to be really dominant in the first story, since that was the first time Angela, the lead character, has been seen by the reader as having sex with a guy, so I wanted there to be an age gap between him and her 18 years. This would allow her to experience a better quality of sex than she would have received going out with a guy of her own age, plus at the beginning of the first story, I establish with you, the reader, that the five women have regular girl-on-girl group sex with each other in their dorm, so the quality had to be something way better than she could get from even her friends.

However, having done that, for this second story, I suddenly felt hemmed in by his character. I felt that it would be tedious and inconvenient for her to continue going out with someone like Jake, owing to his semi-teacher status. He is one of last year's seniors, coming back this year to work as a part-time coach for the team. So he is not an official member of the teaching faculty, but plays a teacher-like role in his relationship with the players on the college team and the cheerleading squad. I began to feel leery about the potential creepiness of Angela being in this teacher-student dynamic, even though he isn't really a teacher. I felt a one-off seduction was OK, and maybe a few weeks of going out or casually dating him might be fine, but then this would leave the second story as a kind of dry, listless, will-they-won't-they-but-who-really-cares-anyway kind of thing, and the series would falter. Plus it would give the other four women nothing to do, while Angela spends all her time with him.

I felt that now she had experienced sex with a slightly older guy, it was now no longer necessary for her to continue this 5-year age gap. So let's knock off Saxon and find someone new!

I will now introduce a new male lead - Patrick. This guy is a bit less dominant than Jake, plus is younger, at 21, bringing the age gap down to a more reasonable 3 years. I have decided that he's going to be a male competitive cheerleader that she meets at the civic center. He's very handsome, with a buff, athletic body, and has lots of attractive, sexy confidence. He's also very well-endowed. I think there is more potential to move forward in this series with a male character who is into the same sport as Angela and the women, while not being a student at the university, which allows him to be out of the loop of student life. This might end up being ideal for Angela and the girls, since nobody at the university knows who he is, and this means they can invite him to the dorm over and over again for lots of sexy shenanigans, and nobody needs to find out.

So now, armed with five horny women characters, and a studly new male character, let's move confidently into the future!

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